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Monday, February 28, 2011

MURDER YOUR DARLINGS: an interview


Last month, John Murphy, one of Querytracker.net’s success stories, saw the release of his first novel, MURDER YOUR DARLINGS. We’re thrilled to have him here to talk about his pathway to publication. Also, make sure you check out the side link for an upcoming agent contest. It starts this Thursday and is for adult fiction.
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In August 2009, you landed John Talbot as your agent and he sold your mystery novel, Murder Your Darlings, to an imprint of Penguin. The book came out in January. Can you tell us about your journey from The Call to now?
It has been a perilous journey, fraught with danger in exotic locales!
Just kidding. It has been surprisingly simple—almost uneventful. The editing process with my darling editor was a piece of cake. I was asked for some ideas for the book cover, and I was thrilled with the cover that Penguin came up with. Frankly, the hardest part was the copy-editing stage, where I was called to “defend” a number of historical references. (Fortunately, I had done my homework and that went down fairly easily as well.) As a matter of fact, the greatest challenge presented itself when the book was released—how can I let people know about it? I’m still working on that one.

What was one of the most surprising things you learned in creating your book?
Two surprising things: We hear a lot these days that editors don’t have time to edit and publicists only have time for the most successful authors. That was not my experience with MURDER YOUR DARLINGS. Both my editor and publicist have been surprisingly generous with their time and very open minded about my suggestions.

Was there ever a time you felt like giving up? Why didn’t you?
Yes, every day I felt like giving up. And I still do. As everyone who reads this knows, getting published is foolhardy. It’s brutal on the psyche. But, aside from the day to day doubts, my “darkest hour” was right before my agent John Talbot called. I had thought I had a slam dunk of a book, but after sending out nearly 60 query letters and getting no action, I figured I must be wrong. Fortunately, right when I was truly about to throw in the towel, I got the call. Sometimes it’s just a matter of sending out letter after letter after letter, and hoping it clicks with someone who understands.

What is the hardest/least favorite part of being a writer?
The worst part is the carpal tunnel injuries from signing all those hefty paychecks. Will they never stop pouring in?
Huh? Wha? Oh, OK, I’m awake again. Fell asleep there for a minute… The hardest part of being a writer, for me, is finding the time to write. I have a busy full-time job, six-year-old twins, and a house in need of constant repair. I need to learn how to write in my sleep. That would be really helpful.

If you could give a message to aspiring authors everywhere, what would it be?
Two things: If you’re really serious about being a writer, then get serious about writing. Don’t wait for the muse to whisper in your ear. Treat it like a job. Punch in and do your work.
Second, forget about writing what you know. Instead, write what you want to read. What kind of story do you wish somebody would publish? Write that. There’s somebody else out there who’s waiting for the same story to be on the bookshelf.

What is your advice to new or unpublished writers? 
Take it seriously (even if you’re writing something frivolous) and, if you’re serious, keep at it. Oh, and be hard on yourself when you wear your editing hat. Also, don’t take others’ advice without a grain of salt.

What kinds of things are you doing to promote your books? Did you do anything before you found an agent? If so, what?
I’m learning that word of mouth is the best form of promotion. And writing a good book is the best thing you can do to create word of mouth. That said, I’ve written several guest posts on other people’s blogs, and that’s been very positive and rewarding.

Is there anything you wished you had done differently?
I wish I had used a pseudonym, such as “James Patterson.”

What are you working on now?
The second book in the Algonquin Round Table Mystery Series. In this one, a second-rate painter commits suicide, and Dorothy Parker enlists the aid of Harry Houdini to find out why. Shenanigans and séances ensue. Should be lots of fun.

Now for the big question, how do you find to write with two young, twin girls and a full-time job?
With great difficulty.

More can be found about John and MURDER YOUR DARLINGS on his website.

Once again, congratulations, John!

Sunday, February 27, 2011

March Contest Coming Later This Week: Adult SF/F/H, Thriller, and Romance


March Contest: Adult SF/F, Horror, Thriller, and Romance

Agent Weronika Janczuk from the D4EO Literary Agency will be judging out next contest, which opens at 9am EST on Thursday of this week (March 3rd) and will run for 24 hours, until 9am on Friday (March 4th).

This contest is for ADULT fiction only, so no MG or YA projects in this contest, please.  

Ms. Janczuk wants to see a one-line pitch and the FIRST 100 words (plus or minus 1/2 sentence--don't just cut it off mid sentence) of COMPLETED science fiction, fantasy, horror, thriller, or romance novels.

Submissions MUST be made via an online submission form that will become available starting at 9am EST on Thursday, March 3 (don't worry, we'll post a link so you can find it)! A free QueryTracker.net membership will be necessary to use the form and can be accessed from the form page. Only entries received through the online form will be accepted. Entries emailed directly to the agent or agency will be disqualified.

Please note: Sometimes the email notifications from this blog do not go out right when the post is published (a Google Blogger issue we cannot control). If you are an email subscriber, please realize this email might arrive after the contest has begun.

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

A TOUCH MORTAL Q & A Giveaway with Leah Clifford

Congratulations to QueryTracker's very own Leah Clifford on the release of her debut young adult novel, A TOUCH MORTAL. We are thrilled for Leah and are delighted she has joined us here today for a question and answer session.

Leaving a question in the comments will enter you in a blind drawing to win one of two prizes. Leah is giving away a signed copy of her book and a 10 page critique.

The floor is wide open: publishing, writing, or personal questions--well, not too personal. ;)

Here's some info if you haven't gotten your copy of A TOUCH MORTAL yet.

About the book:

Eden didn't expect Az.

Not his saunter down the beach toward her. Not his unbelievable pick-up line. Not the instant, undeniable connection. And not his wings.

Yeah.

So long, happily-ever-after.

Now trapped between life and death, cursed to spread chaos with her every touch, Eden could be the key in the eternal struggle between heaven and hell. All because she gave her heart to one of the Fallen, an angel cast out of heaven.

She may lose everything she ever had. She may be betrayed by those she loves most. But Eden will not be a pawn in anyone else's game. Her heart is her own.

And that's only the beginning of the end.


About the Author:

Leah Clifford has been an extreme cave tour guide, a camp counselor, a flight attendant, a pizza delivery girl, a waitress, and a grocery store clerk. Now she adds author to that list. She lives outside Cleveland, Ohio. This is her first book.


More can be found about Leah and A TOUCH MORTAL on her website and Goodreads.

Once again, congratulations, Leah!

Okay, guys. Ask away in the comments and Leah will drop in throughout the day to answer your questions.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Don't Forget Q&A with prizes tomorrow! A TOUCH MORTAL by Leah Clifford

Remember to drop by tomorrow, Wednesday, February 23rd.  Author Leah Clifford will be answering questions about writing, publishing and just about anything.

Leah is giving away a signed copy of her book, A TOUCH MORTAL, and a 10 page critique in a blind drawing from the names of people who ask questions in the comments section of tomorrow's post.

See you tomorrow!

Mary

Monday, February 21, 2011

Mentioning Similar Books in a Query: How To

Today's question is:

Many say a query should include reference to a novel the agent has represented in the past that's similar to your own. How pertinent is this advice? If it's important, does a writer proceed by spending weeks reading numerous novels before querying each agent? I can't imagine doing so, and this tactic may not even succeed.

Mentioning a novel or novels the agent has represented serves several purposes. First, it tells the agent that you read (a surprising number of "writers" claim they don't) and that you know how your book would be positioned in the marketplace. Second, it tells the agent that you know and appreciate that she has sold books similar to your own, which suggests that you and she might in fact be a great match.

To figure out which agents are selling books like yours:

1. Read in the genre in which you write!

I don't know about you, but one of the reasons I'm a writer is because I love books! Every month, I head over to my local library and pick up between five and seven books in genres I love to read. I don't usually read all of them (because not all of them end up appealing to me when I start reading), but I've discovered amazing stories this way.

One writer in particular I recently discovered is Sara Creasy, who writes science fiction. Her book Song of Scarabaeus was an amazing mix of fascinating sci-fi plot and romance -- something I also aim to accomplish.

2. Check out the Acknowledgements.

New authors in particular often thank their agents in their Acknowledgements. So when you find a book you love, flip to the front and check the Acknowledgements.

Creasy did in fact mention her agent, Kristin Nelson, in her Acknowledgements, so I can make a note of this and go from there. But let's say the author you're admiring (and feel has a similar style and story to you) isn't mentioned in the Acknowledgements.

Lucky you -- you belong to QueryTracker, so you have a secret weapon in your arsenal!

3. Check out QueryTracker.net's Who Reps Whom database.

QueryTracker.net gives you access to the incredibly useful Who Reps Whom database. (Look under the Resources pulldown menu.) In this database you will find nearly 10,000 authors and the agents who represent them (or have represented them in the past). Lo and behold, Creasy's agent (Nelson) is also listed here.

Additional Tips:


  • Be sure the author you're mentioning is in fact someone whose writing is similar to yours -- not just someone you admire.  For example, you may love Stephen King's writing -- but do you really write like him?
  • Try to pick authors who aren't household names.  Again, this suggests that you really do read in the genre and know the work of the author you're mentioning.
  • If you're able to, mention more than one author the agent represents.
  • Try to explain -- briefly -- why you feel your story will appeal to the readers of the authors you're mentioning. 


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Friday, February 18, 2011

Publishing Pulse, February 18, 2011

At QueryTracker.net this week:
Congratulations to our two newest success stories!
A.G. Howard  http://querytracker.net/ag_howard.php
Erin Bowman http://querytracker.net/erin_bowman.php

Our listings this week include a new agent, Wendy Schermer of Mortimer Literary, and updates to thirteen other agents' profiles. Always double-check before you query.


A huge congratulations:
Happy publication day to longtime QueryTracker maven Leah Clifford! Her novel A Touch Mortal will be released this coming Wednesday, February 22nd. 


To celebrate her book release, she has agreed to participate in a live Q&A session on the blog on February 23rd. Anyone will be able to ask her questions in the comments section. She will also provide a signed copy of her book and a 10 page critique as prizes for a raffle. 


Big news:
Borders Books files bankruptcy, listing a total debt of $1.29 billion. Learn more about the causes, other causes, the effects, and whether their location near you is on the list of ones that will be closing. (Your Kobo ebooks, by the way, are perfectly safe.)


Industry news:
AAP reported that electronic books registered $441.3 million for the year among the reporting companies, compared to $166.9 million a year ago. Ebooks made just under 8% of book sales for the year.

Macmillan has launched a romance community site at www.heroesandheartbreakers.com where you can read short stories, get news, writing tips, and a lot more.

With Texas seeking $270 million in taxes from Amazon.com because they have a distribution center in Austin, Amazon has decided to close its warehouse there

Around the web:
It's a dangerous world. Find out how to spot a bogus literary agent. (Keep in mind that QueryTracker's very own Patrick is selective about which agents he puts into the database in order to reduce this risk; you can also check at Preditors And Editors if you aren't sure whether an agency is legit.)


Jessica Faust of BookEnds will be highlighting one query per week on her weblog. It could be yours!


Literary Quote of the Week:
"Do not wait to strike till the iron is hot; but make it hot by striking." -William Butler Yeats
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Jane Lebak is the author of The Guardian (Thomas Nelson, 1994), Seven Archangels: Annihilation (Double-Edged Publishing, 2008) and The Boys Upstairs (MuseItUp, 2010). At Seven Angels, Four Kids, One Family, she blogs about what happens when a distracted daydreamer and a gamer geek attempt to raise four children. She is represented by the perceptive Roseanne Wells of the Marianne Strong Literary Agency.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

A Touch Mortal Release Celebration!

Come help us celebrate the debut release of one of our original QueryTracker members, Leah Clifford!

Leah's book, A TOUCH MORTAL comes out on February 22nd.  

On Wednesday, February 23rd, Leah will be our guest on the blog. She'll be answering questions about  her book, the writing process, the publishing industry, and whatever you guys want to talk about. 

Aaaaaaaaaad... there will be PRIZES.  Leah is giving away a signed copy of her book in addition to a ten-page critique. 

So, join us here on Wednesday and leave your questions in the comments. We are thrilled for Leah.