Posted 1/31/2012 09:00:00 AM by
Stina Lindenblatt
Our contest with Natalie Lakosil closed at 9 am this morning.
Please do not contact Ms. Lakosil or the Bradford Literary Agency directly regarding the contest. Winners will be posted here, on the blog, and put directly in touch with Ms. Lakosil once she has selected the winning openings. She anticipates to have the results by mid-February.
If you have any questions in the meantime, you can post them in the comments or shoot me (Stina) an email using the email address in the sidebar of the QueryTracker Blog!
Thanks again to everyone who entered, and to Ms. Lakosil for judging!
Posted 1/30/2012 09:00:00 AM by
Stina Lindenblatt
Agent Natalie Fischer Lakosil from the Bradford Literary Agency will be judging the contest, which opens at 9 am EST on Monday, January 30th.
The contest entry window is 24 hours and will end at 9:00 am Eastern Standard Time on Tuesday, January 31st.
This contest is open to the following genres:
Commercial fiction, with an emphasis in children’s literature (from picture book to teen), romance (contemporary, paranormal and historical), and upmarket women’s fiction. Specific likes within those genres include historical, multi-cultural, paranormal, sci-fi/fantasy, gritty, thrilling and darker contemporary novels, and middle grade with heart.
Ms. Lakosil wants to see the first 100 words (plus or minus 1/2 sentence--don't just cut it off mid sentence) of COMPLETED novels and a one sentence logline. There is a limit to only ONE entry.
Submissions must be made via our online submission form. (A free QueryTracker.net membership is necessary to use the form and can be accessed from the form page.) Only entries received through the online form will be accepted. Entries emailed directly to the agent or agency will be disqualified. Any entries with logline longer than a single sentence or with an opening longer than 100 words (it can be less than that, but no more than a few extra words over) will be disqualified.
If you have any questions or comments, feel free to post them in comments!
Best of luck to everyone and special thanks to Ms. Lakosil for judging!
* Please note: Sometimes the email notifications from this blog do not go out right when the post is published (a Google Blogger issue we cannot control). If you are an email subscriber, please realize this email might arrive after the contest has begun.
Posted 1/28/2012 09:00:00 AM by
Stina Lindenblatt
Agent
Natalie Fischer Lakosil from the Bradford Literary Agency will be judging our next contest, which opens at 9 am EST on Monday, January 30
th.
This contest is open to the following genres:
Commercial fiction, with an emphasis in children’s literature (from picture book to teen), romance (contemporary, paranormal and historical), and upmarket women’s fiction. Specific likes within those genres include historical, multi-cultural, paranormal, sci-fi/fantasy, gritty, thrilling and darker contemporary novels, and middle grade with heart.
Ms. Lakosil wants to see the first 100 words (plus or minus 1/2 sentence--don't just cut it off mid sentence) of COMPLETED novels and a one sentence logline. There is a limit to only ONE entry.
At 9am on January 30th, we will make a submission form for the contest available on the QueryTracker.net website. (A free QueryTracker.net membership will be necessary to use the form.) A link will be posted on this site at the start of the contest. Only entries received through the online form will be accepted. Entries emailed directly to the agent or agency will be disqualified. Any entries with logline longer than a single sentence or with an opening longer than 100 words (it can be less than that, but no more than a few extra words over) will be disqualified.
* Please note: Sometimes the email notifications from this blog do not go out right when the post is published (a Google Blogger issue we cannot control). If you are an email subscriber, please realize this email might arrive after the contest has begun. Therefore, you should visit the QueryTracker Blog whether or not you receive an email about the contest on January 30th to get the link to the submission form.
Posted 1/27/2012 07:00:00 AM by
Stina Lindenblatt
Contest Reminder
Our contest with agent Natalie Lakosil will open Monday at 9:00 am EST. For more information, click on link in the sidebar for Latest Contest.
Success Stories
There are three new success story interviews this week. Congratulations
Around the Web
Publisher Houghton Mifflin Harcourt struck a deal to publish and distribute Amazon Publishing’s adult books in the fall.
The ARR (Association of Authors’ Representatives) has been discussing the current situation of agent members helping clients with ePublishing current or backlist titles. Agent Kristin Nelson explained what this means.
Agent Vickie Motter shared some tips on formatting your manuscript. With a growing number of agents reading requested material on their eReaders, her advice will help you prevent them from going cross-eyed while they read yours.
Have a great weekend everyone!
Stina Lindenblatt writes young adult novels. In her spare time, she’s a photographer and blogging addict, and can be found hanging out on her blog, Seeing Creative.
Posted 1/25/2012 07:00:00 AM by
Danyelle L.
World building.
If I were to stereotype, I'd say it's something that every author who writes speculative fiction is intimately familiar with. And yet, it's a tool that all authors--regardless of genre--can make good use of in deepening their stories and bringing them to life.
World building, in it's most basic form, is the process by which an author takes the story as it is in his or her mind and carefully reconstructs it on the page.
In speculative fiction, it involves creating a new world from the ground up. In other genres, especially in contemporary settings, it involves catching the world and pinning it in strategic places in the story.
So what's involved in a world? There are three main components to any world:
Language
For any people in any world to live together, they have to be able to communicate with each other. How this is done--both verbally and nonverbally--will depend on the people and their world view. What's important to this people? What do they value? Have disdain for? Fear? What sounds do they make, and why? How formal or informal is the language, and in which situations?
Having a basic understanding of the people's language will enable both the author and the reader to have a better understanding of the world and the characters that populate it.
Culture
Culture covers a wide range of things: architecture, morals, values, laws, dress, grooming, fashion, foods, expressions, governments, religion, customs, art, daily life, etc. A person's culture helps to shape who they are. How they see the world. And how they react in certain situations.
Having a basic understanding of the people's culture can help the reader connect with the characters better, and can also present all kinds of opportunities for conflict.
Geography
How the world is shaped and formed will have a huge impact on who populates what areas, if they are to be populated at all, and how they must adapt in order to survive and flourish. Geography will also shape a culture and language as people integrate it into their daily lives.
During the world building process, it's highly likely that you will have more built than you may ever use--and that's okay. More than okay, actually, because the more world building that makes if from your mind to the story, the more real and vibrant your world will feel to the reader. (Caveat, like everything else, there is a balance. All world building and no story makes for a very dull time.)
Once the basics are down--even in a contemporary setting--it's all a matter of details. Of allowing the world to intrude upon the characters, to help shape who they are and who they will become. It will inform potential conflicts in the story, and deepen the sense of history of the tale.
Some great resources I've used for my own world building include: allowing my muse (a.k.a. my subconscious) to run wild,
Patricia C. Wrede's world building questions, and Holly Lisle's world building series that (for now) includes
language and
culture.
What about you? Any good world building resources out there?

Danyelle Leafty (@danyelleleafty) writes MG and YA fantasy. In her spare time, she collects dragons, talking frogs, and fairy godmothers. She can be found discussing the art of turning one's characters into various animals, painting with words, and the best ways to avoid getting eaten by dragons on her blog.
Posted 1/23/2012 11:06:00 AM by
Jane | @janelebak
Last week I ended up in my basement searching for something. I found a box of stuff from my desk at the previous house, and I pulled out a journal-type book a friend (a multipublished SFF author) had given me right after I got my first publication contract. She said, "Record everything here, that way you'll always have the information handy."
I'd dutifully followed her instructions...for the first four publications. And then afterward, well, I'm not too good at remembering to do things like that. Organization, people. Organization. (Which is why you may have noticed this blog post is about four hours late going up. Organization.)
So there I was in the basement, this piece of my past in hand, and I paged through it. My first novel. A short story I'd published right after that. A short story in an anthology. And then...
And then a story I'd forgotten I had published at all.
Now I remembered the story. It was a flash humor piece, jotted down in about two hours, worked over for another few weeks, submitted...and if you'd asked me before that moment, I'd have said rejected.
Instead I found myself looking at a page with a magazine name, an issue number, and which pages the story appeared on. Which means not only did it get accepted for publication, but it got published, and somewhere I must have a copy of this issue. Only I had no clue it had ever happened.
(This is the point where my lovely literary agent may be wishing my mother had locked me in the basement and never allowed me access to the postal system.)
I'm going to go out on a limb and assume I'm not the only writer who has organization problems. For me this was not really an issue: I never tried to republish the story, but you can see where if I had, two magazines claiming first rights to a story might both get a little ticked off at the author with a memory problem. That's not even going into the legal problems that would arise if there was major money involved. (I assume the market paid under $50 for my flash humor story. Maybe under $5. I don't remember.)
Therefore, I will tell you what my wise publishing friend told me. First, find a place where you will record everything. Everything. If you get a letter to the editor into the paper, you will record it there. Guest blogging? Speaking to your friend's son's high school class? You will record it there. My friend gave me a blank journal because we were in the early 1990s, but you might feel a spreadsheet is the better way to go. (I like the blank book idea, though. It makes it feel special-er. Like history in the making.)
You will record:
- the title
- the publisher, along with its location (whether it's West Cupcake, VA or http://awesomemarket-dot-com)
- the ISBN if there is one
- the publication date
- the page numbers if it's in a magazine
- the name you published it under if you ever plan to use a pseudonym
- the amount you were paid, if any
Rule Number One for my life is "don't be an idiot," but since as you can see I routinely violate Rule Number One, good record keeping can only help matters.
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Posted 1/20/2012 09:00:00 AM by
Ash Krafton | @ashkrafton
Success Story
Congratulations to Melodie Wright, who has recently signed with agent
Tricia Lawrence of Erin Murphy Literary Agency. Read Melodie's
success story on Query Tracker.
Publishing News
It's been a landmark week in the history of the Internet.
On Wednesday, many websites went "dark" to show their opposition to the Stop Online Piracy Act (SOPA) in the U.S. House of Representatives or the PROTECT IP Act (PIPA) in the U.S. Senate. Wikipedia shut down completely, as did many others.
If you haven't heard much about this legislation (beyond the blackout reactions) it's a good time to read up on the subject. Many are concerned that, in an effort to control "internet pirating", the laws will impose censorship on everyone--pirates and ordinary citizens alike.
Chuck Wendig
speaks out against the proposed laws and Tim O'Reilly
discusses the White House's response.
Because of the pressure created by those blackouts, the legislation lost a lot of support. You can
see if your Representative opposes this legislation. If you are interested in doing so, you can also
sign Google's petition.
The legislation goes up for vote on January 24th.
Conference Calls
In more positive news, many writers, agents, and editors are looking forward to the upcoming conference season.
Attention, romance writers! Registration is now open for
RWA2012, which will be held July 25-28 in Anaheim, CA.
Also, my group (
Pennwriters) will be hosting our
25th Annual Pennwriters Conference May 18-20 in Lancaster, PA.
Writing conferences are fantastic ways to network with agents and editors, to meet up with writer friends new and old, and to take in workshops that help us hone our crafts. Most of all, they are an opportunity for us to leave the confines of our solitary writing efforts and simply enjoy being one of a fabulous group of peers.
Have a conference you'd like to mention? Want to encourage a new writer to attend their first one? Leave a comment and spread the word.
To the Blogs!
Rachelle Gardner writes about
timing and trends and the "maybes" that sit on agents' and editors' desks for months—perhaps "no response" doesn't mean "assume rejection", after all.
Janet Reid prefers simple uncluttered queries—read about
tips to keep your queries free of unnecessary information.
Vickie Motter goes a step further and clarifies
what your query is not supposed to be.
In this older post, author Roni Loren describes her experiences at a writers conference and shares what she learned during
an agent version of the Gong Show. Check out the list of things that may get your query "gonged" by an agent.
And Don't Forget...
...about the upcoming contest.
Agent
Natalie Fischer Lakosil from the Bradford Literary Agency will be judging our next contest, which opens January 30, 2012. She'll look at the first hundred words and a one-sentence logline for children's lit, romance, and upmarket women's fiction manuscripts. Find details about specific genres as well as the guidelines
here and start working on your pitch perfection.
Unsure how to write that killer logline?
We can help.
Have a wonderful weekend, everyone!
Ash Krafton is a speculative fiction writer who resides in the heart of the Pennsylvania coal region, where she keeps the book jacket for "Abraham Lincoln: Vampire Hunter" in a frame over her desk. Visit the Books of the Demimonde blog for updates on the release of her debut novel, Bleeding Hearts: Book One of the Demimonde, forthcoming in March 2012 through Pink Narcissus Press.
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