tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7454222325290313520.post6840289222205305256..comments2024-03-28T05:13:12.886-04:00Comments on QueryTracker Blog: Creating TensionPatrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17771807777617244491noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7454222325290313520.post-3161022556582768892012-11-20T18:32:22.854-05:002012-11-20T18:32:22.854-05:00Thanks, Tricia and Kim!Thanks, Tricia and Kim!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7454222325290313520.post-30163382547854397392012-11-20T08:41:11.103-05:002012-11-20T08:41:11.103-05:00Hi Christina!
I'm actually reading The First F...Hi Christina!<br />I'm actually reading The First Five Pages right now. That's one of those books I kept hearing about and finally decided to check out for myself. The chapters on Sound and Comparisons are spot on.Kim Van Sicklerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04957877837203134260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7454222325290313520.post-72443326966980102932012-11-19T11:59:18.570-05:002012-11-19T11:59:18.570-05:00That's a great example. It's hard sometime...That's a great example. It's hard sometimes to know when adding atmosphere and setting is just enough and when it's slowing the story and losing the reader. Beta readers forever.Tricia J. O'Brienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05993110400088806252noreply@blogger.com